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Mastermind feedback: the README is hard for a layman and doesn't market the value. The opening led with an abstract "independent second opinion" tagline, then "reference implementation of CLAR," then a flowchart — mechanism before benefit.

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Rework the opening to sell the benefit first:

  • Hero: "Impasse gets you better results from your AI — the first time. It brings in a second AI, from a different company, to pressure-test the work and catch the problems your AI missed, so the result you commit to is one you can trust."
  • A "Why a second AI?" explainer (blind spots) now follows the promise instead of leading.
  • Reframes the reviewer as an "independent advocate for one thing: the quality of the result you ship" — advocate for the outcome, not the operator's position, and not merely against the host AI.
  • Moves CLAR, the flowchart, and the pre-release caveats below the pitch.

No mechanism content was lost — the never-edits / verify-reconcile-escalate points remain, just reordered.

Reviewed cross-provider with Impasse (dogfood)

  • First pass caught the draft overclaiming — "can't catch its own blind spots," "only the real problems," "blind spots don't match" — softened to accurate claims.
  • A marketing-calibrated pass cleared the benefit-first headline as defensible and caught a real accuracy bug: verify/reconcile were grammatically attributed to the reviewer when the host performs them (a core invariant). Fixed.
  • Voice lint clean. Reconciliation converged (3/3 resolved, 0 escalated).

Docs-only; no code paths touched.

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The opening buried the value under jargon — an abstract "independent
second opinion" tagline, then "reference implementation of CLAR," then a
flowchart — before a lay reader learned why they'd care (mastermind
feedback).

Rework the opening to sell the benefit first:
- Hero: "Impasse gets you better results from your AI — the first time."
- "Why a second AI?" explainer (blind spots) follows the promise.
- Reframe the reviewer as an "independent advocate for one thing: the
  quality of the result you ship" — advocate for the outcome, not the
  operator's position, and not merely against the host AI.
- Move CLAR, the flowchart, and the pre-release caveats below the pitch.

Copy reviewed cross-provider with Impasse (dogfood). First pass caught
the draft overclaiming ("can't", "only", "don't match" — softened to
accurate claims). A marketing-calibrated pass cleared the headline as
defensible and caught a real accuracy bug — verify/reconcile were
attributed to the reviewer when the host performs them (a core
invariant); fixed. Voice lint clean.

Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.8 (1M context) <noreply@anthropic.com>
Claude-Session: https://claude.ai/code/session_01X8XaW2bqgYnp7oRVgfHXid
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