docs(README): lead with the benefit, not the mechanism - #4
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The opening buried the value under jargon — an abstract "independent
second opinion" tagline, then "reference implementation of CLAR," then a
flowchart — before a lay reader learned why they'd care (mastermind
feedback).
Rework the opening to sell the benefit first:
- Hero: "Impasse gets you better results from your AI — the first time."
- "Why a second AI?" explainer (blind spots) follows the promise.
- Reframe the reviewer as an "independent advocate for one thing: the
quality of the result you ship" — advocate for the outcome, not the
operator's position, and not merely against the host AI.
- Move CLAR, the flowchart, and the pre-release caveats below the pitch.
Copy reviewed cross-provider with Impasse (dogfood). First pass caught
the draft overclaiming ("can't", "only", "don't match" — softened to
accurate claims). A marketing-calibrated pass cleared the headline as
defensible and caught a real accuracy bug — verify/reconcile were
attributed to the reviewer when the host performs them (a core
invariant); fixed. Voice lint clean.
Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.8 (1M context) <noreply@anthropic.com>
Claude-Session: https://claude.ai/code/session_01X8XaW2bqgYnp7oRVgfHXid
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Why
Mastermind feedback: the README is hard for a layman and doesn't market the value. The opening led with an abstract "independent second opinion" tagline, then "reference implementation of CLAR," then a flowchart — mechanism before benefit.
Change
Rework the opening to sell the benefit first:
No mechanism content was lost — the never-edits / verify-reconcile-escalate points remain, just reordered.
Reviewed cross-provider with Impasse (dogfood)
Docs-only; no code paths touched.
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